In the first one, the trees got overworked and lost their freshness. I'm much happier with the trees in the second piece because I used fewer marks on it. I added some pretend flowers in the field, and now it's probably my favorite one of the day.
"Wet Field", 5x5 on black paper
"Two trees in the field", 5x5 on black paper
"Marshland", 5x5 on black paper